Sunday, December 21, 2008

happy solstice!


wild rose skeleton, n. sask. river valley, end of november 2008





(somewhere out in the field
we are walking, & our strong
legs tremble.) paper-birchs kneel,

fall: & the wind drifts through,
brushtailed grasses quiet hands
on my spine. come,

bury yourself in me: the edge
of the earth yawns gently,
bleached wheat wreaths paling,

stalks spent. (somewhere
out in the field lying fallow
the wind’s an old man, winding

his fingers in an old woman’s
wiry sun-silvered hair, unplaiting
the last of the woven strands

with shaking tender hands.) now
to sleep in the remnants of the sky’s
charred marrow, a gentle furnace;

rest in me. (somewhere out
in the field we hold it in our
bones, a soft glow in the root-tangle)

curlicues of fireweed embers
frozen to the horizon, to the
rib-ripples of clouds; just strip

to your soft skeleton, starry
filaments of cow-parsnip, twine
around me, now:

we’ll conduct light.

* * *


this poem has no name yet... also, i'm not sure i'm finished with it. but it wishes you a happy solstice nevertheless.


2 comments:

Jason Treit said...

This poem astounds. Your word choices skip like smooth rocks between stanzas. It all stirs, blends spirit and earth, releases us from the wind's shaking hands, into the field.

I wasn't so sure about cow-parsnip filaments, but then saw this:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Heracleum-lanatum01.jpg

jenanne said...

thank you for the lovely & poetic comment!

cow-parsnip is not the prettiest of words, but yes -- those filaments are exactly what i mean. mmm.

duzhe djakuju!